Monday, May 22, 2017

Rules Of The Grey Lodge Comments

Rating: 5.0

Good is heads and evil is tails.
I am a coin that flips the scales
Light is stagnant, darkness savage
Grey is the point of perfect balance
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Kevin Patrick
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Susan Williams 05 June 2017

Oops, forgot to note that I give this a huge 10! ! ! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 05 June 2017

WoW! This is quite an original piece of writing- - - - - - . Good is heads and evil is tails. I am a coin that flips the scales Light is stagnant, darkness savage Grey is the point of perfect balance - - - - - - - - - - Stunning. Perfectly balanced and stunning. Creation seeds, destruction reaps- - - - - - - - - - -Dark but perfectly in tune with the complexity of this work. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I am very taken with this poem, Patrick. You let the ying and yang rip! !

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