Monday, April 26, 2010

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Let me climb into your lap

And kiss your eyes closed
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bianca felix
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Josh Schultz 26 April 2010

i think maybe a bit too short, but I still did really like the poem

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Neil Kennovin 26 April 2010

Very good, kinda short but that's okay. The fourth line is a great one, but it seems kinda out of place.

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Terence George Craddock 26 April 2010

nice expression and thoughts, you have a gift

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