Friday, September 16, 2016

Rukhsat (Urdu) Comments

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Jazib Kamalvi
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Konab Ghumman 08 March 2019

Well written short and definitive like to see more

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 March 2019

Thank you so much, Konab G, for your words.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 06 March 2019

bahut wadia! ba kamaal! ati sunder! sundram! beautiful!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 March 2019

Bahut shukria, Jagdish Singh gi.

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Vashita Moondra Sarda 09 April 2018

applaudable. :) ......

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 April 2018

Thank you so much, Vashita, for it.

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Rameeza Nasim 20 January 2018

Beautiful Gazal! expressing love and bittersweet feelings of farewell.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 January 2018

Many thanks, Rameeza, for the insightful comments.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2017

Revisiting to this poem. It is a beautiful poem on farewell and friendship having touching expression. So nahin sakta.. . ro nahin sakta. Interesting. Thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 October 2017

A nice revisit of a great poet with fine comments indeed. Thanks sir.

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Hibah Shabkhez 15 March 2017

Delighted to see an Urdu poem here - thanks! 😄

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Thanks, Hibah

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Kavita Singh 16 February 2017

wah wah bahut khub 10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Shukria, Kavita gi.

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Rameeza Nasim 06 February 2017

waah bohat khoob! sakhun aap apni qismat per bhi rou nahi sakta!

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Shukria, Rameeza gi

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 November 2016

Wah Shaandaar deep ghazal. Boot khoob shairi style here.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Shukria, S.zaynab

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Muhammad Ali 24 November 2016

beautiful and meaningful tribute. nice ghazal

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Thanks, Muhammad Ali

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Akhtar Jawad 17 September 2016

Khoobsoorat Ghazal.................................................

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Shukria, Jawad sahib

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2016

Who has never slept can never sleep at all. Friendship is ever amazing. Wise drafting is shared...10

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Thank you a lot

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