Ruins Comments

A heartrending depiction has been made on ruins. All stanzas are much impressive. The following lines emphasize much.... You need a heart to hear this silence And this silence has many stories to reveal Hence silence please. A great write.10

In a few seconds I was led to a monument that had been ruined through forces of nature by reading this wonderful piece of art. Very vivid depiction of ruins that could tell a lot of history. They are the pieces of evidence of power, beauty and grandeur. Your final stanza gives more emphasis to the write. Great lines. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10++++