Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Ruins Comments

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My heart - do not ask me
Where love is,
It may have been a river of compassion, and it dried.
It may have been a castle of imagination, and it collapsed.
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Ibrahim Ibn Salma
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Karen Sinclair 20 June 2012

hello... when i saw the first two words (and im being honest) i thought... oh no... as i hate tweedy writes... but this is not tweedy it is relevant it is honest and so well written... my husband and i have travelled through parchment moments and still do... especially as we are both so annoying but amongst the ruins invariably there are moments which trigger the why you adored each initially... Great descriptive skills and some thumpingly good lines...karen

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