Ruined Emperor Comments

Hi Sreejith, Now stop not But flow An exhortation to all who find themselves at end of the road. Good poem. Sreejith, why are you not writing/posting anymore? Do Write and share.

Nice poem. I really liked it. Great expression, total command of language, I would love to read more of your poems. The evanescence of life is the truth everyone needs to understand.Your poem reminds me of the great poem.'ozymandias' by P.B.Shelley. Thank you for your message. Read my poems too.

nice poem! strong expressions!

spread the rays of a thousand Sun.............

While roaming around in Agra forte in Delhi years back I felt what exactly you said in your poem. Nicely written. Keep writing. Rgds Noor

Well written life itself is a journey nothing is permanent in this world very truly said. Thanks for sharing.. Liked it very much and it was very touching too..10/10.. Keep on writing...

Thanks for sharing ur poem with me. Both the poems u mentioned were excellent. It had a message, strong vocabulary, not very formal. Keep writing. One of ur poems coincided with my Immortal Journey. I felt really happy. Ur presentation is really good.

nice. philosophical tone. marks 10.

a very nice and touching poem, full of wisdom, those who live by the sword die by the sword nice to read

dear sreejith.....when ever god has walked this earth he has come with the ambience of a emperor.yet at the same timehe isa parama or great yogi.that is why he is different than us.your poem.though illusive maya makes us think otherwise., the truth of life is only impermanence.if we have understood this life would be easy to bear.lovely poem, and i am goingto read more! thanks for sharing. ritty

Well presented... filled with truth...

descriptive...much truth inside...good work...10

Good poem, well written, well-crafted, rhyming very nicely..

Wel great job done. Very wel writen. Nothing is life is permenent, life is journy. Good message

Nice soul searching work... :)

Hi Sreejith, its a nice, descriptive poem. sure wind of fortune can change its direction any time, but we must not give up and try again. a nice message too. thanks for sharing.

Good Attempt.........

Good line this one: Now Stop not but flow....... Good presentation as per what you meant....... But you can use a bit of polishing to make your shining poem glow....... well i have read a few of your works as you have asked..... most of them lack simplicity....... Not that I say it is not good but...... why not sit & meditate on your work a bit just so you can get that tiny bit missing in your work...... you can start by asking people who are very much new to peotry introduced to it by Structural forms for various ideas...... I was Glad to share my views..... Keep writing....: -)

Well presented what you meant.A nice poem indeed.Keep it up....

Its a nice poem with a beautiful meaning indicating the truth