Ruffling Mind Comments

Gorgeous poem about ruffling birds, such a very impressive view, and as we notice in the poem, these feathered friends belong to God's creation too. Very artistic-poetic about repeating the word " ruffling" . Masterfully weaved, a true masterpiece! 5***** full vote! To MyPoemList. God's Blessings be greatest for you, dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir.

Profound, unexpected thoughts about humble birds. Noticeable repetition of 'ruffling', most effective.

It's a wonderful poem, birds ruffle their feathers to remove the dust and moisture. The philosopher poet imagines ruffling of mind to remove its dust and moisture. Kumarmani Mahakul has left it on the readers as to what these dusts and moisture are. He has rightly left it to his readers as it differs from person to person, from nation to nations and from races to races.

Many thoughts with the very works on earth. Thanks for sharing.

then America needs lot of ruffling sir.

Like a little bird this mind is This is ruffling the feathers Many thoughts have many wings Mind is ruffling to remove dusts. So enjoying the touch.. Like.. And like.. Thank you dear poet