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XXVI

I don't have a golden chariot to carry me across
I walked and walked, still I am here where I started
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Ramadas 08 September 2019

In the journey of life the poet does only what told to him by God unaware that it is a sin or holy act! Like a hornbill waiting for a drop of water from the clouds the poet yearns that he has not sought for a spot in his heart for his infinite kingdom. The poet's unselfish worship is the only reward he seeks. Splendid verses! !

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We engage in Karma quite unaware the positive and negative aspects of it. We have to believe that we are made to do everything by God

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sreekumar 17 July 2019

I do my duties as you hint. Good lines. Beautiful poem

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Thank you very much dear Sreekumar

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 April 2019

Totally ignorant of distinguishing the right from the wrong It's you who tempt me sin, it's you who urge me atone I do not commit any sin of my own, bringing a moral philosophy of sin and virtue into your beautiful poems makes you even greater . love you dear poet. tony

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Thank you very much dear friend Dr.Tony. We children of God are too immature to understand him. It is certainly He who push us to our Karma and so wee need not worry about the result,

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Prathibha Dp 24 January 2019

YES...AS THE POET RIGHTFULLY SAYS....GOD ACTS IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS...TRY TO FIND HIS PRESENCE IN EVERYTHING...THEN FINALLY THINGS AROUND US WILL START MAKING SENSE....

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Thank you Prathibha for the comments in appreciation

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Valsa George 22 January 2019

All quartrains are rather pleas to the Almighty to lead and direct in the arduous journey on earth. We are travelers trudging along rugged paths with the heavy burden of responsibilities and sorrows! We are helpless to a certain extent..... like dolls who dance according to the pull of strings by a doll master. Often we fail to seek the Almighty's help. Thought provoking and beautiful!

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Thank you Valsa George for the profound thought and encouraging words

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