Wednesday, January 9, 2019

Rudraksha - Xxi To Xxv Comments

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XXI

I can hear the bells chiming far in perfect harmony
With the merry songs of the retreating birds
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Ramadas 03 September 2019

The Almighty's varied creations are all beautiful however small they are and man is not expected to to disrupt or destroy them lest it may incur His wrath and displeasure which may manifest in the form of natural disasters! ! Poet is aware of this truth and vows to abstain from such things as he thinks that the sufferings of His creations are of more concern to him than the prayers in his lips! What a noble thought! Kudos to DPN!

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Its a sin to hurt any living being even if its on God's purpose

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Leela kumari R 16 May 2019

Poet experiments in different styles of writing poetry.These are short, but remarkable verses.Actually they are pearls in oysters (ie pearls of love, fulfilment, motivation etc.) Congrats!

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Thank you very much dear friend. When I read the comments of some of my friends I really doubt whether my poems and myself deserve that much. Such comments are really my energy

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Prathibha Dp 24 January 2019

THE POET CLAIMS THAT ACHIEVING SOMETHING ABOVE OTHERS DOES GIVE US GLORY...BUT FINDING PEACE BY SACRIFICING OUR SMALL GAINS FOR OTHERS SMILE KEEPS US CLOSER TO GOD....

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Thank you Prathibha. Yo accept what God gives and to find happiness over it is great

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Valsa George 15 January 2019

There is a longing in everyone and everything for love and self fulfillment! When the lotus and the water lilly had it, they wilted and withered! You also long to have that self fulfillment before you wilt and wither! I love the last stanza! A 10

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Thank you Valsa George. Your appreciation of my poems always give me much energy to go ahead along the poetic avenues

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 January 2019

Lotus blooms with the ambition and a short flower motivates mind. An excellent poem is well penned.

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Thank you dear brother Kumaramaniji. I am happy that your encouraging comments appeared so quick as usual

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