XVI
Deciding where to stop you rotate the wheel of time
Man fumes and fumbles in vain to play it at his will
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Each quadruple focuses on various elements in nature and explores its relationship with man and boundless gifts of Almighty to him. Good work!
Thank you Leela kumari. Decisive gifts of God always take a man to the heights of his life even though it has never been in the list of his aspirations
Beautiful reflections on time, life and God’s magnificent gifts to us. So rich in imagery touching us like cool waters of river. Really enjoyed reading. To my poem list to read again.
Thank you Savitaji for the gracious comments humbling me to the core. I thankfully acknowledge your decision to add it to your poem list
Hope erase darknss of mind....makes way for light...with success in hands.....with god....arm in arm....ARAISE THE HOPE IN US...IN A WAY...GOD WORKS THROUGH POETS LIKE YOU...
Thank you Prathibha very very much. The light that helps us tide over the darkness of miseries is sourced from that Light which only a few can perceive
Lovely thoughts about God's great magnanimity in creating this beautiful universe and man's mishandling of things for his selfish motives are powerfully presented in this beautiful string of wisdom! Great poem!
Thank you Valsa George. Your comments, as usual, are encouraging and elating.Please read 'A Homage' which has been selected as Poem of the day of 24/01/19
Thank you Edward for the appreciation of this poem. Encouraging comments
Alas! My eyes were blind to see Time's purpose! Nice for sharing this here!
Thank you poet brother for the nice comment
God, s love and care for his creations, His acknowledgement for man's efforts and toil and His mercy showered on the nature are all praised in poet's unique style! ! good work indeed! !
Thank you vermuch Ramadas. God's reward for man's good intensions are always precious and prolific