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Sitting here on this vast sand bed of the sea-shore
I see the stallions of waves galloping towards the land
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The superb imagery in this write makes a reader at close range to the sea. The immaculate beauty of God's creations have been painted on the beautiful canvas of this marvelous poem. Beautifully crafted and well executed.
Thank you very much dear poetess. The beauty which we see with our truthful eyes and enjoy with our immaculate hearts alone is blissful and takes us close to God.
Watching the rising and falling waves by the see has spurred a chain of thought to give rise to this beautiful poem. Serpent imagery is so charming. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you very much Savitaji for the appreciating comments. The rising waves reminds the hood of a serpent. the retreating waves have no head nor tail like time that has no beginning nor end
The first two quatrains are indeed marvellous! Rich imagination augmented by powerful diction! The image of the sun slain by the knights of time and the sky getting stained by sun's blood is quite catchy. Also the mermaids' dance at the sight of the resurrected sun.... and the sun's regal ride in the chariot!
Thank you very much Valsa George for the valuable appreciation. I have sincerely put all my energy to make the series beautiful and meaningful as well.
Beauty and pleasure are but momentary. Yet, we crave for that charming vision of God's manifold creations of nature to live a life of joyous wonder. A Rudraksha created with shinning beads of delightful imagery.
Beauty created by God does not last long. In other words our eyes eyes are incapable to behold the beauty the creator fills in his creations for long. Such is his illusion.