Monday, June 17, 2019

Rudraksha - Lxi To Lxv Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Human race has been struggling hard to survive
The sweeping fire of a crane's desperate curses
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Valsa George 27 June 2019

Wrong doings invite curses. According to the intensity of our misdeeds, we will have to suffer! That is an indisputable way of Nature's retribution! All through History, we can see such long lists of crime and punishment! The modern man is so callous that he commits heinous crimes without any qualms. The poet here ardently prays to God that no curse should fall on his fellow beings! A poem of great depth with examples from history and legends!

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Thank you very much Valsa George. The sufferings of human society is definitely reciprocal to his misdeeds. Nobody is ultimately spared from punishment for his deviation from the path of true life as envisaged by morals and ethics

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2019

Hustle and bustle! ! Struggling along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you very much dear friend. We human beings are social beings and as such we are collectively responsible for the sin one commits and as such it's our duty to apologies on behalf of all.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 June 2019

A great poem indeed how human race has done the mistakes and still survives. Poem with a strong message. beautifully crafted and with sweet rhyming it flows very nice. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks.

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Thank you AKP. I am sorry I overlooked this elating comments of yours. It's during this review it has been noticed unanswered. Thank you very much

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