Rudraksha - Li To Lv Comments
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Diffuse in my breaths, my Lord, as the sweet scent
Of a freshly blooming flower of heavenly brand
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An ardent and powerful prayer. It expresses in beautiful detail the utmost desires of the Poet to be with God.
A poem of deep spiritual broodings! The first one is excellent..... an ardent devotees supplication to fill his whole being with the divine grace of God. Your quest or thirst to merge with God is beautifully and powerfully expressed in the fist three quatrains! A sure 10
Thank you very much Valsa George. Every comment of yours actually hail me to the heights of confidence and remains an incessant source of energy. The last two quatrains are a humble attempt to combine scientific and spiritual truth
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8/10/2025 3:15:40 PM # 1.0.0
The penultimate and ultimate stanzas are great poetic expressions that affirm the power of God over humanity and the entire universe. A well crafted and presented write.