Rudraksha - Levi To Lxx Comments
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Away from thy radiance my being is all darkness
With a soul straining inside for a ray of brightness,
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Away from thy radiance my being is all darkness With a soul straining inside for a ray of brightness, Like the drowning struggles to rise to the surface For a puff of fresh air that slakes suffocation To be brief.........Beautiful and lovely! Every line and every thought is sublime! Full marks
Thankfully acknowledge your very positive appraisal with elating and encouraging comments which always give me strength and spirit, energy and confidence
A powerful and wonderful prayers that will guide us to the right path of life. Every stanza has its. own strength. A great acknowledgement that God is Omnipresent. Wonderfully written and full of wisdom.
Thank you dear sister. Your comments really energise me to venture into new depths of poetry
Thank you Sreekumar. You will have a good reap for your good deeds
Guide me God to the lamp that burns throughout Sparing not a moment to steal the pleasure of darkness, The lamp, the flames of which are with vibrant calories Capable of keeping me warm in freezing winters of life. - - - - - - - - Precious gems- - heartfelt prayers before Almighty to give you wisdom to be a lamp that dispels darkness.
Thank you dear Bharati Nayak. I am really very happy with your prayers. Such prayers come out from immaculate hearts only. Long live
The pleasure of darkness! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks a lot Edward. Impure thoughts never peep into an enlightened heart.
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8/11/2025 4:42:19 AM # 1.0.0
These are beautiful poems in quatrains. I have not read the earlier poems in this series called Rudrakha. Is it translation of some verses?
I am sorry Pathakji; somehow your comments escaped my notice. I am thankful to you for reading my poems. About the poem I may say that it is based on a pure idea struck me and began to flow as a fresh Ganges right from my thoughts. It's not at all a translation, but fresh from my heart