Rudraksha - Levi To Lxx Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Rudraksha - Levi To Lxx

Rating: 5.0


LXVI

Away from thy radiance my being is all darkness
With a soul straining inside for a ray of brightness,
Like the drowning struggles to rise to the surface
For a puff of fresh air that slakes suffocation

Lxvii

t's your grace that I see as beauty in every bloom
Devoid of your glare moonlit starry nights gloom
The shining heavenly bodies stall stark sullen
The glowing sun will sink deep into Stygian

Lxviii

Seeds we sow, fertilised by thoughts, words and deeds,
Grow up in time's wilderness as giant trees bearing fruits
In colourful abundance but in unpleasant pungent taste
It's our err sowing sin and craving for a reap all sweet

Lxix

I am glad my lord, the bowl I hold before thee for alms
You fill with gifts of golden glories to the brim all times
My mundane greed blames me harshly from deep inside
Why don't yehold bigger bowls to get more and stride

Lxx

Guide me God to the lamp that burns throughout
Sparing not a moment to steal the pleasure of darkness,
The lamp, the flames of which are with vibrant calories
Capable of keeping me warm in freezing winters of life.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
God is Omnipresent. Without His grace everything is in darkness. It is He who gives us everything. We reap according to what we sow. It is He who guides us to glory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 19 August 2019

These are beautiful poems in quatrains. I have not read the earlier poems in this series called Rudrakha. Is it translation of some verses?

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I am sorry Pathakji; somehow your comments escaped my notice. I am thankful to you for reading my poems. About the poem I may say that it is based on a pure idea struck me and began to flow as a fresh Ganges right from my thoughts. It's not at all a translation, but fresh from my heart

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Valsa George 19 July 2019

Away from thy radiance my being is all darkness With a soul straining inside for a ray of brightness, Like the drowning struggles to rise to the surface For a puff of fresh air that slakes suffocation To be brief.........Beautiful and lovely! Every line and every thought is sublime! Full marks

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Thankfully acknowledge your very positive appraisal with elating and encouraging comments which always give me strength and spirit, energy and confidence

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 July 2019

A powerful and wonderful prayers that will guide us to the right path of life. Every stanza has its. own strength. A great acknowledgement that God is Omnipresent. Wonderfully written and full of wisdom.

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Thank you dear sister. Your comments really energise me to venture into new depths of poetry

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sreekumar 17 July 2019

Beautiful poem.It is very true what we sow is what we reap

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Thank you Sreekumar. You will have a good reap for your good deeds

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Bharati Nayak 16 July 2019

Guide me God to the lamp that burns throughout Sparing not a moment to steal the pleasure of darkness, The lamp, the flames of which are with vibrant calories Capable of keeping me warm in freezing winters of life. - - - - - - - - Precious gems- - heartfelt prayers before Almighty to give you wisdom to be a lamp that dispels darkness.

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Thank you dear Bharati Nayak. I am really very happy with your prayers. Such prayers come out from immaculate hearts only. Long live

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