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I submit before thee my Lord
This sacred bead of Rudraksha
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The poet carries these chants a chain made of rudraksha beads under his lips to everywhere he goes! ! He submits before the Almighty with atmost devotion and acknowledges His sublime domination and supremacy! ! Good opening!
Thank you very much Ramadas. As I believe in the supremacy of God I carry with me Sublime thoughts about him everywhere I go
I submit before thee my Lord This sacred bead of Rudraksha That I carried everywhere with me With all it's devotional sanctity A wonderful Series that i look forward to read with much interest and enthusiasm.......10
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The poet helps us find he real meaning of prayer through this poem. Like each beads in rudraksha, the poet, through each stanza, is helping us take a step closer to god.Thanks for writing.May the count of beads never end...
Thank you Prathibha. When the very purpose of writing this poem has been felt served the satisfaction of the writer really grows beyond the limits
Beautiful devotional prayer coming from a pure devotional heart.. Like Rudraksha beads our prayers are also sacred and we offer all to our lord. Wishing you joy and peace for coming year.
Thank you very much Smt.Savitha Tyagi. I am delighted to realise that it is the cord of God's love that binds human beings together, we being His Rudraksha beads
My pleasure is immense to surrender before thee Everything that counts belonging to me And to beg of you for my daily needs What a bliss to get alms from thy hands! These five beads of Rudrkhya, the five devotional prayers are precious gems of wisdom.Beautiful and sublime-
Thank you Bharati Nayak. Rudraksha is independent quadruplets. Thank you for the appreciating comments which hail me to heights
The beautiful poem shows the resentment and concerns that most people possess after living their life in the way they wanted. But in their spiritual life, they usually regret about their deeds.It is the common nature of the humanity.
Beautiful presentation of Rudraksha, a devotional prayer, has been made in five stanzas having independent quadruplet. I love much lines are...Like the cool virgin waters of a forest stream To a parched bird from the heart of desert Let thy love gush into my yeaming soul And calm down the burning resentment Beautiful poem.
Thank you Kumaramaniji. Your love filled words are encouraging as they always have been
This poem comprises of independent stanzas which are quadruplets. Its devotional in nature
This poem Rudraksha is prayers with devotion to God. Each stanza is an independent quadruplet
Great attempt....congrats
Thank you very much Retha