Rudely Sedated Comments

hi robin how r u. this is a great poem as it touches the heart.It speaks a lot about the creator of the poem and about her/him. here u speak something and something not but understandably it is passionate, melancholy, illusion, despair and the dream underneath. Here I found a woman with a mind in your. I love the woman with the poem. Thank u

I relate, somewhat. Shocking and bizarre suits my personality better. Interesting self evaluation. Muses exist. You might check out An Amusing Find, one of my few good poems. All about my muse. Her name Baharia Msichana.

I enjoyed this poem. I relate to it in the insomnia sense, and the feeling that I don't/can't perform the basic things everyone else manages and oh yes, the you are too old for that resonated as well. Thank you.