Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Rude Awakening Comments

Rating: 4.5

Bouncing in nets of sleep
carousing winky waves -
gently, I lay
grasping dreams grey
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Seema Jayaraman
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Loke Kok Yee 05 November 2015

switch on the air con and windows tight you will wake up only when the sun shines bright thanks

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Seema Jayaraman 05 November 2015

Trying to save on carbon footprint. Thanks.

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Rahman Henry 04 November 2015

Beautifully expressed, lovely poem.

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Seema Jayaraman 05 November 2015

Sleep before awakening is so precious.

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