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Beautiful poem....Lovely combination of pomegranate that look alike rubious pearls.....Loved reading it.

Such an evocative piece with great lines! !

A beautiful poem my friend, a great write.

Pomegranate fruit is my favourite.... Fantastic poem............10****** Rose,

To see and behold a beautiful mind, Like a pomegranate fruit in another; how could we not attempt to pluck the rubious pearls, Of her heart with my dried lips? . How could we not attempt to taste mind vision?

Nice poem, rubious pearls...

Scotty, 'lips' would technically be the end of the sentence 'Can I pluck the rubious pearls of her heart with my dried lips? ' Question marks go at the end of the sentence. Which explains why the question mark is after lips and not pearls. Anyways, a decent poesy!

I like it! 'dried lips' is good. Much imagery.Much good poem! Why am I writing like Tarzan? Don't know. Watch your grammer, though. Question mark after lips, not pearls (?) Nice one Vipins. Scott.

Hi.. Out of all the 4 new poems, most liked poem by me is this! ! ! ! Sounds Gr8 and Phenomenal....

Very nice romantic poem... Many have wanted to pluck! lol

I like the phrase rubious pearls. It almost sounds like her sacred heart. Your lips are dried because you thirst for her, yes? Your descriptive analysis of her as a pomemgranate signifies a rich lush, fruit with lots of pearly seeds inside Love that reference as well. Did you intend a double meaning with vale and veil? Both spellings work in this instance. It was interesting how when she walked by she created a wind, a stirring his your mind. This is an excellent poem,

I like the phrase rubious pearls. It almost sounds like her sacred heart. Your lips are dried because you thirst for her, yes? Your descriptive analysis of her as a pomemgranate signifies a rich lush, fruit with lots of pearly seeds inside Love that reference as well. Did you intend a double meaning with vale and veil? Both spellings work in this instance. It was interesting how when she walked by she created a wind, a stirring his your mind. This is an excellent poem,

Phenomenal poem, every line was simply brilliant! fantastic write! :)

You're a great poet! The contrast so sharp. Perhaps you should taste the fruit and make your lips less dry. Vipins, this is truly beautiful!

no words. how do you get such powerful inspirations, and delicate language? its really one of the best poem of yours.

Embodies the poem with great lines, I like the whole here...and the conclusion just so beautiful.dry lips and rubious peal like pomegranate..watery and sweet... Second, why i like this poem very much, is because..maybe you dont know that pomegranate is one of my favorite fruit ever and coincidentally it was written here...i like the red ruby shape and colors...it deserved to be in such good write like in this poetry..About your poetry i can say anything more, always good and expressive.. The true poet is taking over your hand hahaha.write more my friend_Unwritten Soul