Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Rubies Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the North Sea, nigh Borae, land of the red rubies,
Lay our fleet, in the wild sea.
Over the cruel waves, dark and without mercy,
Sailed forth the dread ships, of our Lady.
...
Read full text

Jerome Brooke
sea
COMMENTS
Katherine Wiley 22 January 2008

Jerome-I enjoyed the high spirit of your poem, and the personification of dawn and her ships. Your rhythm is great, and the poem flows well. Good work. Kate

0 0 Reply
Jerome Brooke

Jerome Brooke

Evansville, Indiana
Close
Error Success