Saturday, October 8, 2011

Rubbing Out Life's Mistakes Comments

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Spelt it wrong?
Here's a rubber just rub it out.
I coloured outside the lines,
I drew a crooked line.
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Lil Sutton
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Brian Jani 15 June 2014

Nice poem, keep it up

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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 10 October 2011

Yeah, i agree with u all, bummer, isn't it? We jst hav to live it out, and then some.... I was feeling kinda low today till i read this, thank u!

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Vipins Puthooran 08 October 2011

I agree to what Luis Estable said and our life is only for us where we can decide the path but should be not a wrong one! A nice poem! ! ! ! !

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