Rubber Band Comments
Go on stretching yourself,
go on stressing yourself,
tie me in the knots of hates,
make marks of your hate on my sensitive skin.
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A great metaphorical write. A thought provoking well written piece.10
A beautiful write! Like the rubber band, one has to stretch oneself and never break before trials and tribulations! Here the rubber band is used as a great metaphor.... A10
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8/17/2025 3:42:43 AM # 1.0.0
Your words capture the nature of profound inner stress. A moving verse with great insight into the human condition, Akhtar.