Friday, December 10, 2021

Rubaiyat ~ Self Destruction Comments

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When body starts controlling our mind
Our soul goes far away from the goals
And we get lost in this world
Neither we are able to fill this void,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 December 2021

A body not controlled by mind is like a machine. A poem of great insight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 December 2021

A body not controlled by our mind is like a machine . A poem of great insight.

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Ricky Mangathen 10 December 2021

Mundful poem for body to giveaway.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2021

You are absolutely right dear Dr Asim! Thoughtfully put.

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David Wood 10 December 2021

Some minds can be uncontrollable, some minds are empty, British politicians for example, mindless and brainless.5* poem tho.

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