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There is pleasure and pain in love! Sometimes it is like an unfathomable sea, sometimes elusive as a mirage in the desert! You have really captured the complexity of love in these lines!
Love is a wonderful phenomena. Sometimes, it brings to us the biggest of joys and on others, it looks like an illusion, an unreal world, an insatiable thirst. Very well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.
beautifully sad but the pleasure is in the trying Thanks Asim-10++
Yes you have truly realized. Love is definitely a deep sea. Very interesting composition shared...10
A bleak outlook on love, but if that's not a viewpoint made for poetry, nothing is. I like your poem.
Deep sea and desert with oasis..Great thought wise wor Asim.