Thursday, October 22, 2015

Rubaiyat - On Love.. Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 25 October 2015

Deep sea and desert with oasis..Great thought wise wor Asim.

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Valsa George 23 October 2015

There is pleasure and pain in love! Sometimes it is like an unfathomable sea, sometimes elusive as a mirage in the desert! You have really captured the complexity of love in these lines!

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Rajnish Manga 23 October 2015

Love is a wonderful phenomena. Sometimes, it brings to us the biggest of joys and on others, it looks like an illusion, an unreal world, an insatiable thirst. Very well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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Loke Kok Yee 23 October 2015

beautifully sad but the pleasure is in the trying Thanks Asim-10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Yes you have truly realized. Love is definitely a deep sea. Very interesting composition shared...10

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Sanjukta Nag 23 October 2015

Sad one, still amazing as usual.10+

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Brian Mayo 23 October 2015

A bleak outlook on love, but if that's not a viewpoint made for poetry, nothing is. I like your poem.

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