Sunday, March 28, 2021

Rubaiyat - Four Liner Comments

Rating: 5.0

In your anger, despair and unfulfilled dreams
In your response, dealing and behaviour
Your true colour emerges as reflection
It is the combo of heart and soul.
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M. Asim Nehal
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S H 31 March 2021

Marvellous 4 liner.

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RH 29 March 2021

Very true, in these situations you just cannot hide your true face. Very true its the combo of heart and soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2021

Soul's reflection is wonderfully captured like full stars bloom in sky.. Heart should ever beat with love. An excellent poem is well penned.

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Kostas Lagos 28 March 2021

Great four-liner!

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 28 March 2021

What else a man can see its reflection. Wise words.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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