Sunday, April 3, 2022

Rubaiyat ~ Change. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come, fill my eye with desire and heart with love,
The garden is ready for spring:
The buds have formerly started to blossom,
How may I remain in darkness, when sun has risen.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Martinez Salotori 05 April 2022

Motivational poetry. One up.

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soren Barrett 04 April 2022

A beautiful statement worded so well

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 April 2022

The last line makes me question also Bravo!

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Shreya Hacks 03 April 2022

So positive poem. Just loved the tone.5****

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M. Asim Nehal

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