Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Rubaiyat - Bitter Truth Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 21 November 2015

This is fantastic Rubaiyat, Invictus.

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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

Yes. Somewhere down the line when we stand all a lot of people come and shake hands with us, and when we fall no one stands beside us.. A very well written poem Asim.. Thank you for sharing...

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Darren Jkoeryo 17 November 2015

A philosophical tone in this rubaiyat, Catching up with, Asim Thanks for sharing.

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Liza Sudina 17 November 2015

Interesting what waits us there. Great speed, I think!

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Shakil Ahmed 17 November 2015

nice poem, beautiful ending, yes it is the bitter truth, thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2015

Yes you are philosophically right. After death bodies are embraced by Earth only. Realizing this bitter truth of life is very amazing. Wise sharing...10

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