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Death could be beautiful your words proved it. very thought provoking
Woah this is witty and intense. Seems to be realistic about death in a great poetic way. Great in brevity. Thumbs up. Superb rubaiyat, . Pls do leave your thoughts comment about my latest prose too, titled, 'stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'
So profound. Death is inevitable n a bitter truth that every human has to face. How well you capture the fear this word holds for us. A big 10.
Oh! it is a brilliant philosophical poem on death with immense deepness. Dear Asim, you have so wisely and nicely presented this poem here, hence u are thanked.
Excellent poem. This reflects the hypocrisy of people who are so scared of the realities of life or for that matter- death. Thanks a lot, Mohd. Asim ji.