Rubaiyat ~ Comments

'yet some are happy, some are sad and some complaining? '...the canopy itself has two shades white and dark...so is our life too...meaningful write...full score

The word beautiful doesn't give it justice Bravo!

we reap what we sow. Superb Rubaiyat! Top stars always dear Asim ji

Yet, each one's fate or destiny is different.

God provides equally for all through its benign nature

yet some are happy, some are sad and some have complaint

Profound..yet some are happy, some are sad and some complaining?

Superb Rubai. I like this format.

DJ liked the four liner. You are very good in such Rubaiyat.

Fate and destiny divides us. Nice poem.