Saturday, July 3, 2021

Rubaiyat ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

We live in this world under one blanket
sky is our canopy and earth is our carpet
all take the same air, water, food and nurture
yet some are happy, some are sad and some complaining?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 05 July 2021

'yet some are happy, some are sad and some complaining? '...the canopy itself has two shades white and dark...so is our life too...meaningful write...full score

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 July 2021

The word beautiful doesn't give it justice Bravo!

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we reap what we sow. Superb Rubaiyat! Top stars always dear Asim ji

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Yet, each one's fate or destiny is different.

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God provides equally for all through its benign nature

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KAVIN CHARALAN 04 July 2021

yet some are happy, some are sad and some have complaint

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Zumas Millamo 03 July 2021

Profound..yet some are happy, some are sad and some complaining?

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Poetic Sky 03 July 2021

Superb Rubai. I like this format.

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 July 2021

DJ liked the four liner. You are very good in such Rubaiyat.

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Gordon Walter 03 July 2021

Fate and destiny divides us. Nice poem.

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