Rubaiyat (1) Wake! For The Sun....Omar Khayyam (Hindi) Comments

An excellent translation that makes me read again and again...amazing...many stars***************

Sir please let me know from where I can buy the physical copy of the translations of this poem

For a while I wondered if Khayyam translated your quatrain and came out wanting, but it was you that did it, with expressions so haunting. Kudos dear poet.

Khoobsurat tarzuma hai. My heart yearns for mystique..... Beautiful! Naya rabta hai jurha mera is ghumshoodagi se Mehak aane lagi hai ab is ghul jaisi zindagi se.

Another fine stanza from the 'Rubaiyat'. A striking picture of the sun, moon and stars, then locating the poem in the East, ' The Sultan's Turret'.

सूरज उगा है रात के सब चिन्ह धुंधलाने लगे तारे भी अपना कारवाँ ले कर के हैं जाने लगे....so sweet translation sir! Loved reading it....10

You are like KALIDAS and Elizabethan sonnetier. Wake! For the Sun, who scatter'd into flight The Stars before him from the Field of Night, Drives Night along with them from Heav'n, and strikes The Sultan's Turret with a Shaft of Light.

सूरज उगा है रात के सब चिन्ह धुंधलाने लगे तारे भी अपना कारवाँ ले कर के हैं जाने लगे Kya baat hai! So beautiful! ......10

An exotic poem bringing the reader to the day long past.+10

عمر خیام کی رباعیاں ادب میں اپنا اک خاص مقام رکھتی ہیں

sky, stars, sun night.. a fine poem.. thank u dearr poet.

very good.excellent, thanks for sharing

How wonderful is this slice from the great epic.

The sun has come after the dark night to give energy to all on earth who alight. Without the sun there can be no life so to give way to it all stars also take flight Sir poet am I right

very nice O POET Good you give instant translation all will understand My version would be the sun has become after the dark night to give energy to all on earth who alight.Without the sun there can be no life so to give way to it all stars also take flight Sir poet am I right

Here is my attempt into Hindustani - Utho! suraj ne raat ke saray taroN ko ga-ib kar diya hai raat ko bhi usnay bhaga dala hai uski roshni main sultan ka burj ab chamkatay maar raha hai

The Rubaiyat is made much more sublime in your translation. Thank you my friend.

I like the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam very much and I recall this as an early stanza. Masterful translation.

i could NOT have written a better translation! ! ! ! bri :) in what language was the poem originally written?

I remember a few lines from Meer Babar Ali Anees Teh kar chuka jo manzil-e-shab karvan-e-subh, hone laga ufaq se huwaida nishan-e-subh, gardooN se kooch karne lage akhtaran-e-subh, her soo hui buland sada-e-azan-e-subh, pinhaN nazar se roo-e-shabe tar ho geya, alam tamam matla-e-anwwar ho geya. A nice piece of Omar Khayyam nicely translated in Hindi. The poet succeeds in capturing all the charms of the original poem.