Tuesday, March 15, 2005

Rtfm 25 A Fishing Story Comments

Rating: 3.3

Freed from focus thoughts slide by
A swift and dark flowing river
White waters eddies and whirlpools
A poet plucks treasures from the stream
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Stewart McKenzie
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Chuck Audette 07 December 2005

This fdeserves a much better rating than currently. A great poem about the poetry process itself. - chuck

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Richard Quinby 01 October 2005

Good poem, Stewart. It would be much better if you worked on the punctuation and grammar- nitpicking I know. I struggle with them too

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John Tiong Chunghoo 04 June 2005

swift sparkling water splashes its way down the river the way grandad sings away his blues each night in his bath

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