Wednesday, September 5, 2007

Royal Orchard Comments

Rating: 3.0

Same simple emotions
Rubbed raw again
Same stupid mistake
I'll make again
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Anthony Fortunato
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Ross Lakes 10 September 2007

Your poem delivered the promised mood established in the first two lines. I loved the 'kills its innocence'

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