Thursday, March 22, 2007

Rowan Tree Comments

Rating: 4.4

Beneath the green and berry red
They flutter about
Making a melody with each wing strum
Magical lil’ creatures
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Patricia Gale
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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 May 2015

Lovely fairy piece of writing. Beautiful tree.

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Angela Barker 27 September 2007

This brought me to my childhood, I danced with fairies in my back yard then. Thank you for this.

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Peter Stavropoulos 18 July 2007

I like the way you use fairies and other creatures (insects) in some of your nature poems. It brings the reader back to a childhood innocence, all the better to appreciate what you are saying in the poem. In this one a feeling of comfort and protection (and love) , as would a child of the forest, for her creator. A deep and talented piece.

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Patricia Wulf 24 April 2007

This is such a pretty poem to read. I love stories and poems that are about nature and have the feeling of enchantment.

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Christina Finlayson 31 March 2007

I was attracted to this title and especially like the second half of this poem, as it addresses the tree directly in a fine poetic way.

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Robert Howard 24 March 2007

This sings and dances with the life force of love. As soon as I finish this message this perfect gem is going in my favorites file.

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Duncan Wyllie 23 March 2007

I love the style of this one Patricia, but then, I can't seem to remember one of your writes that I didn't like, WHAT A STAR YOU ARE LOve duncan X

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I love the way you spin magic from nature with your lyrical pen. t x

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Aldo Kraas 22 March 2007

Patricia I am sorry What is an Rowan tree? Is it like an evergreen? Because I never heard of it

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Charles M Moore 22 March 2007

Enjoyed the read Patricia, Has an olde worldness to it, Enchanting write.Not without knowledge of the subject.

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