Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Row - Boat Comments

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</>On a monstrous lonesome night
In a limping white- beard row- boat
with severe chilling breeze
where waves imitate a belly dancer
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Sajna Kailas
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John Raubenheimer 30 May 2012

I like what Rose says about your poem. It speaks to us like a dream, deeply-felt.

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Dead Rose 11 January 2012

This's amazing...rowing the boat of life with an oar of pain to a land of hope.: : : : 10*****************************10 Rose))))

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Subodh Pandey 03 December 2011

nicr write. somehow it gives a feeling of seclusion

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Jinal Oswal 30 November 2011

A hope, is like a sunlight in dark.. energy booster when we low.. Good write :)

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Ramesh Rai 20 November 2011

a very nice poem you have composed, xlent.you must the goal of hope, it is also my prayer to God. the land of hope is very near.

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Dave Walker 14 November 2011

A great poem really liked it. A good write.

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Dead Leaf 12 November 2011

Don't worry dear friend you will reach the land of hope very soon.....nice poem.....but to me loneliness is the best companion

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