</>On a monstrous lonesome night
In a limping white- beard row- boat
with severe chilling breeze
where waves imitate a belly dancer
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This's amazing...rowing the boat of life with an oar of pain to a land of hope.: : : : 10*****************************10 Rose))))
A hope, is like a sunlight in dark.. energy booster when we low.. Good write :)
a very nice poem you have composed, xlent.you must the goal of hope, it is also my prayer to God. the land of hope is very near.
Don't worry dear friend you will reach the land of hope very soon.....nice poem.....but to me loneliness is the best companion
I like what Rose says about your poem. It speaks to us like a dream, deeply-felt.