Route 9, Massachusetts Comments

Wow! that was intense

this poem moved me cos it reminded me of me when i was 9. gd wright

Samuel i like this one a lot the words you wrote seem like they are really happening to somebody

I think this is a beautifully written poem, brings back all the memories of playing in blanket covers, building dens (aka castles) from our old brown leather sofa and thinking I had been swept off into a world of fantasy... Love it. Ps. thanks for your comments on my material, it means alot. Regards

Short Sweet and to the point, ., ., love the wording again

Hi Samuel, This is simple but deep, i like it very much, tks for sharing

Wow interesting concept, i never thought of that, I'm not really a fan of the - though. Change the format and I give it an 8!

YO THAT WAS DEEP I IVE THAT A 10 THAT MADE ME THINK GREAT

Lovely image of a child deep in thought here...thank you Samuel

keep writing, and expand your horizons. You can do it, you have some great pooetry.

My younger sister used to think the same way. Right on the dot with this poem, well penned.

Wow! ! ! ! I see great talent in you. Keep it up. CP

really nice. put a very clear picture in my head. great read.

this is very good, i like your style as well.. and wow, route 9 towards boston i have traveled on that highway often, where did you live?

Wow! I really enjoyed your style of writing in this poem. It really did remind me of a young child. It was enchanting.

Very good. I used to travel a lot in the car with my siblings, and we'd play silly games etc. You've really managed to convey a sense of childishness and boredom and captured the moment very well. Enjoyed it a lot.

dis ones ma fav its reali awsome :)

my gosh, , , , this child is naughty, while speaking, he didnt pause, he didnt put commas, he didnt breath, he talks very fast....i can relate on this poem coz sometimes i use ths in texting, , hehehehhehehhe...i love ths poem, sometimes funny but with great meaning.. naizz

i lov ur poems do me a favor and message me when u write a new poem! ! thanx! loved this poem by the way! !

hey. tis poem is superb....gr8 imagery...loved it for that..nd thanks for ur comments on ma poems..msg me wen u write a new poem..i'll comment on it..GOOD LUCK! ! >..bye.