Route Comments

Beautiful imagery of life you have portrayed. I loved the most beautiful lines.. No tree called trust No branch friendly come in this way That sees sun and hay... So true you have said in few lines. Every route to jungle our life is adventurous, unknown of what happening next. Loved it.

Very nicely written piece. It does often feel as if we are fighting our way through a jungle in the process of just trying to live through each day. Your poem gives a great detailed image of this. Well done!