Rough Life Comments

Nicely done pretty well.. Someone can relate to their own life

......congratulations on member poem of the day.....and you are so right, life is not easy.....having friends or even someone to chat with always helps...

Lovely poem. Reflects the need of so many. After affects of today's fast life. Hope you reach out and I touch some one and write about it in next poem.

Simple and nice poem. I like it.

nice write, I would have preferred a more consistent rhyme scheme, but I like the message..

Everything happens for a reason. Be strong, and stay focused. Pick up the pieces and go on. You can do it.

Nice one Jacob! :) :)

Liked your poem. Sounds like you were in a rough patch when you wrote it. I look at rough patches, like a speed bump in the road. Take it easy, and keep on going. Wishing all the best.

You are never alone, in this vast world. People who care for you might not be at your proximity, but they are always there for you, somewhere. God bless.

great, no one give u hope but u. go back to ur self to find out the hope in your hreat believe me it's there with that talent Jacob every thing will come & go easly and read me may it help. thanks and good luck

No its not easy for most...hope you get what your looking for, excellent write love the strory behind it...there once, gets harder before it gets better, once you get past the rough part...should be smooth after that.

nice read...May God bless you very soon with the kind of life you yearn for...