Wednesday, October 24, 2007

Rough Gabardine Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was her mercenary heart
that made the deltas of blood
in her veins molten rivulets
of obstinance, hot resolve.
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Sonny Rainshine
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Emancipation Planz 24 October 2007

You have this all sewn up.. This has drawn me in ''veins molten rivulets...' as a canvas on the page that is yearning to transform to an injected dose of coloured fabric screaming to wrap and warp away at my insides.. pop, pop, pop... Thank you, One Peace at a Time, Deana

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David Harris 24 October 2007

Will this an enchanting story of woman weather with life sitting there sewing under an oil lit lamp light. Wonderful imagery that unfold as the story is told. Each line a treasure to behold. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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