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Hi Asavri, An admirable poem on love and pain of separation, loneliness. The opening line, : : pain is beautiful: : inimitably simple but expressive... Every line, nay, every word, arouses the agony, douses the smile. Love, : : How it fastens the body with barbed wire, : : : : making the soul bathe in blood: : (I made the change deliberately) ... I join the chorus: : Unbearable is love: : My hear is just heavy, with your pain... A drop venom..

Asavri, such a well expressed poem👍👍👍

A perfect union of fire and peace is love Endowed with the delight of fierce love Tasting the pure nectar. love is all we need, in the absence of love, we simply vegetate. thank u for this poem which makes the reader think a lot. tony

Throw yourself ten for going Indian again. What about Russian?