Rotary Life Comments

Angst and compassion sit at two ends of the scale in this superbly written and intensely personal piece about the environment we share and pollute and poison. I agree with Sandra about the second verse, although the last one has it's own brilliance too. Love the repetition 'the thought nought' and 'This song ‘ong’. Very poetic. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

very amazing my friend. Just the kind of thinker I like to read. I'm new to this and this is the first chance I've had to see your work, but I shall be checking out quite a bit more. Awesome stuff here, really great.

What an excellent poem. I love the second stanza. Warmest regards, Sandra