Friday, April 4, 2008

Rotary Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

This day. this night, the thought nought, dilly dally
The life that coats a lot of pain on pleasure
And pleasure on pain has shades, subtle, wide.
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Raveendran N.V.
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Alison Cassidy 14 April 2008

Angst and compassion sit at two ends of the scale in this superbly written and intensely personal piece about the environment we share and pollute and poison. I agree with Sandra about the second verse, although the last one has it's own brilliance too. Love the repetition 'the thought nought' and 'This song ‘ong’. Very poetic. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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David Desantis 14 April 2008

very amazing my friend. Just the kind of thinker I like to read. I'm new to this and this is the first chance I've had to see your work, but I shall be checking out quite a bit more. Awesome stuff here, really great.

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Sandra Fowler 07 April 2008

What an excellent poem. I love the second stanza. Warmest regards, Sandra

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