Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Roses Wither & Die Comments

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Read Proverbs last night
and feel deeply depressed;
what happened to my quest
for wisdom, what happened
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Margaret Alice
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Carol Gall 19 May 2009

its a good poem keep writing andf maybe you will find the answr

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Joseph Poewhit 19 May 2009

Wisdom just doesn't come to one, like a magic pill you buy at the store.

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Anupam Srivastava 19 May 2009

Margaret, nice poem. Some of the lines look continuous though.. in a poem there need to be breaks, and for a good reason. Best wishes.

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Margaret Alice

Margaret Alice

Pretoria - South Africa
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