Children have so much to learn
Then only they can earn
a place in this huge world-
But there are things
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apart from a few spelling mistakes i like the idea that you have written about - keep up the writing, and do a spell check to make sure what you post is complete.
The two sides of life are very well brought out. Such a matured observation in such an young age is joyful. All the best. Nice expression, nice verse.