Monday, September 19, 2005

Roses For Feet Comments

Rating: 5.0

A rose of any colour smells as sweet
as you, with the exception of your feet.
May I suggest you plant inside your shoes
some roses, blacks and reds and also blues.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Sylvia Spencer 18 April 2007

Wonderful sense of humor here Herbert in plain clothes you must be a laugh a second a truely positve verse but what would she do with the thorns. Cheers Sylvie

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Madcorporatelawyer . 19 September 2005

you make me laugh out loud: much to the scorn of the Boss above. Great verse Herbert. Thank you.

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Raynette Eitel 19 September 2005

This sounds quite a lot like Ogden Nash. Very clever, very visual, and the olfactory sense does come to play. Good job, Herbert! Raynette

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Theorem Thetruthserum 19 September 2005

Yes...smelly feet are all too common. Good poem.

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Mary Nagy 19 September 2005

A true problem for many! Love the visual. Sincerely, Mary

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