Saturday, December 3, 2016

Roses Are On Fire Comments

Rating: 4.3

A river of stars
a bed of roses still in bud
we're but water lilies
learning to be rainbows
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Mark Heathcote
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Julia Luber 11 June 2019

Has a surreal visual power to it- I can almost see a painting of rivers made out of stars and beds made out of roses and of course those Roses on fire. Great sense of place and imagination….enjoyed!

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Seamus O Brian 07 December 2016

The imagery of this work is rich and vivid. Very imaginative and creative; a wide palette of intriguing visuals. Thank you!

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Much appreciated Neal thank you for the commenting on it.

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Marieta Maglas 07 December 2016

I like this stanza: Waiting for its roots to cleave Cut a blade of green corn But I'm like a phoenix born Without any feathers Looking lost, mystified back at you. a mystic, seducing poem- voted 10.

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Glad you enjoyed it Marieta thank you kindly for the comment.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 07 December 2016

A beautiful poem Mark.Congratulations on being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Many thanks Col Muhammad Khalid Khan it's much appreciated.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 December 2016

I am like a phoenix born without feathers Great imagery and a pleasure to read. Congrats on the member Poem of the Day.

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Pamela Sinicrope 07 December 2016

Congrats on poem of the day! What flowing imagery. The writing starts out beautiful and free and then closes in on choking quicksand. The idea of quicksand filling the chambers of the sky...filling my life....I no longer remember, how once I could cry... very sad. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Thank you, Pamela for this lovely comment it is much appreciated.

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Clarence Prince 07 December 2016

Always faithful, Yes, despite all else!

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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2016

A beautiful poem, very well penned............................................

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Thank you, Akhtar glad you like it my friend. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 December 2016

Mystified! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Indira Renganathan 07 December 2016

He's filled life, my lungs I no longer Remember, how once I could cry........good love poem- -10

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Thank you kindly Indira much obliged. :)

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Bharati Nayak 07 December 2016

I long to kiss the earth Be one day returned to the dust The smoke that engines a star To glow red and orange I long to be another solitary seed.- - - - -A deep passion for creation- - - - - - A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.Congrats for being Poet of the Day.

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Many thanks Bharati glad you enjoyed it. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 December 2016

This poem reminds me of the song BED OF ROSES popularized by BON JOVI...... Congrats on being selected for the day...

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Thank you, Bernard it is much appreciated.

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Kim Barney 07 December 2016

A fantastic poem, Mark! Congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day!

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Mark Heathcote 07 December 2016

Much appreciated Kim, thank you.

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