Thursday, May 8, 2014

Roses And Flames An Angel Speaks Comments

Rating: 4.5

An angel speaks:

Poor demon,
poorer than the poorest beast,
...
Read full text

Daniel Brick
COMMENTS
Maria Sharon Moemise 11 July 2016

the raw emotion is so evident in this poem, I can actually picture this demon cringing in a corner from the pure hate and scorn it deserves. It also takes on another journey of conscience. Human behavior, whether intentional or deliberate......I see life happening and how we as the human race seem almost helpless to stop it from taking its own course. This poem is not just a read-only. It forces you to think. Your work is deserving of an award that has yet to be named in your honor. I love your poems.

0 0 Reply
Daniel Brick 11 July 2016

Thanks so much for your deep reading of my poem. You really lived this poem and didn't just read it. It is so rewarding to have a sensitive reader treat a poem as a living thing, to think through its meaning and share that enthusiasm. I'm so glad we crossed paths, because as you know I engaged deeply with your poems. The Poetry Authorities are going to have to make t-w-o medals of achievement! !

0 0
Noreen Carden 08 May 2014

Hello Daniel the language of this poem is quite beautiful it gives pleasure to read it in the same way food satisfies hunger. I wonder if the angels look down on the world today and are they saddened by what they see I refer especially to the men who recently kidnapped two hundred girls and are boasting that they will sell them into forced marriages.Of course their real mission is to exclude them from education which is a basic right. Sorry Daniel I did not intend to rant just got side tracked. I love your poem. It is beautifully written and lovely to read

0 0 Reply
Daniel Brick

Daniel Brick

St. Paul MN
Close
Error Success