Sunday, September 4, 2005

Roses Comments

Rating: 3.1

Red roses ripen, fruits for eyes in love
I pick just one, so velvety, dishevelled
and hold you close to stubbles of the past
there is a kinship here, of growth and lust
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 04 September 2005

Very beautiful Herbert. This is the side of you that has become such a treasure. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 04 September 2005

I enjoyed this... :)

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John Kay 04 September 2005

Very good concluding line.

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