Thursday, March 17, 2016

Rose Petals (The Amateur Poets) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The buds knew it well,
If they bloom in flowers,
Then either shaking winds
Or the unkind showers,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 27 March 2019

The poem is an example how nicely a poet can exploit beauty.

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M Asim Nehal 28 March 2016

Kya baat hai......Nicely written, Janab.

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Loke Kok Yee 25 March 2016

to change to perfume they will need a helping hand with kind words and guidance on their own they'll stand thank you sir

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 March 2016

So what's the petals' fate? Destiny is sealed and the petals has to obey it's fate. To be changed in perfumes, Or to decay in the dust, it's gods will... Watu Izzu Man Tasha Watu Zillu Man Tasha. Allaah kareem hai. Thought provoking poem Babajaan.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 March 2016

Shaking winds open the gateways of mercy for bud to bloom in to flower. Very thoughtful composition as usual with interesting idea you have shared. Disappearance of petals bring tear and appearance justifies love. Although petals decay or decompose still donate us perfumes. Very very nice poem.10

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