Saturday, September 19, 2009

Rose Petals In Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look across our garden,
Weed-thick,
Scraggly,
Dried out.
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Bob Bowers
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Jean Dament 19 September 2009

I liked how you compared the dried, dead flowers with those of your own life. It was well written showing deep feelings felt. Loved it! Ravensong

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