Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Rose Petals Comments

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He, gave her a Rose
She Drop a tear
her tear releases her fear
he told her that he was near
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salma. torrez
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Unwritten Soul 06 July 2011

Beautiful and beautiful and beautiful....it was a nice write, the emotion really hidden in the rose :) maybe the smell of the rose comes from emotion inside? ? Keep writing friend! _Unwritten Soul

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