Thursday, December 1, 2016

Rose Petals Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am the rose petal
He is the thorn
We born with each other
For reason unknown
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Subarna Chakraborty
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Terry Craddock 08 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Rose Petals Ephemeral Wind Whisper On Water' inspired by the poem 'Rose Petals' by the poet Alisha Castle and dedicated to Alisha Castle.

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Terry Craddock 12 January 2017

'I am the rose petal He is the thorn' beautiful contrasting imagery, 'the tales of fairies... and making 'journey at night' opens into worlds of possibilities

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Clarence Prince 01 December 2016

I die and dry but not mt grace I don't need to give you proof A real lovely, love poem. Thanks for sharing, Alisha!

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Unwritten Soul 01 December 2016

Alisha, never read yours before but this one really stand out to represent quality of your work...the opening stanza it just wonderful

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